Sunday, September 25, 2011

Triquatrain And Pantoum Poetry

The ghostly ship ( fantasy)

In the blue sky height, the red strange sun's waves of light
Rend here and there the painful horizon making it to be mobile.
Touching the Southern Bight, they seem to reach the night,
Making the sea to be as empowered and as blue as a noble.

The sea waves transgress, diaphanous moonlight illuminates the Ness
And cannot displace the waves of the painful horizon in universe.
The moon's whispers,nevertheless, can touch the sea with finesse.
The stars are sky's tears, their light is really true in reverse.

At the horizon's frontiers, from another life, a ship appears
To reach the ghostlike moonlit memories on the shoreline.
The past sinks its fears into the inaudible music of the spheres.
We're on that illusory ghostly ship and you are forever mine.

Note:

Triquatrain

The Triquatrain form was created by Robert L. Huntsman. It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme with a specific rhyming pattern (see below). Lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines 2 and 4 do not.

Rhyme Pattern:

(a,a)b(c,c)b

(d,d)e(f,f)e

(g,g)h(i,i)h

My poem has the Rhyme Pattern:

(a,a)b(a,a)b

(c,c)d(c,c)d

(e,e)f(e,e)f

The mirror

Human values

Mirrored images
Engrossed in self
Magic imago,

Mirrored minds
Engrossed in self
No moral code,

Minded mirrors
Engrossed in self
Imago of banked souls,

Awakened souls
Engrossed in self
No nourishment,

Graffiti walls
Magic in the mirror
Engrossing secret codes,

Erosion of values
Image deterioration,
Anarchy consuming

Human values.

Summer's Dance (Pantoum)

Summer rainbow's ribbon still stretches in the blue rain
As green snakes dance to the tune of charmer's jazz flutes.
Blue butterflies chase velvety bumblebees singing duets in vain,
Summer laughs around red velvety roses and green fruits.

As green snakes dance to the tune of charmer's jazz flutes
Summer's ends her path over meadow, with a dream of green.
Summer laughs around red velvety roses and green fruits,
Moon shines behind the barrier of cloud's fence, as a queen.

Summer's ends her path over meadow, with a dream of green
Into the autumn's sky with puffs of cotton clouds and floating light.
Moon shines behind the barrier of cloud's fence, as a queen.
And dancing green shadowy sprites appear all round the sight.

Into the autumn's sky with puffs of cotton clouds and floating light,
Blue butterflies chase velvety bumblebees singing duets in vain.
And dancing green shadowy sprites appear all round the sight.
Summer rainbow's ribbon still stretches in the blue rain.


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